I had fun reading through MC's misfortunes and I am cackling at how MC doesn't even notice when the Stranger literally has a dagger poised to stab them. They're like "Excuse me, who the hell are you" as well as MC's dialogue, I'm dying because it's what you hear from a typical old timey period. Great job!
This is so well done, and such a great idea for the limitations of the jam! Your writing really brought the maze to life, and the changes of daylight and atmosphere gave a nice sense of urgency.
I liked that you had such a clear voice for the narrator, and how all the styling and polished details of the GUI added to the experience of that characters world - so well presented!
(spoilers to follow......)
Alas for the character that the story is linear, but I had a lot of fun!
← Return to this damn maze
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Oh this is a very fun viewpoint character. Total froofy ditz! I love it.
I had fun reading through MC's misfortunes and I am cackling at how MC doesn't even notice when the Stranger literally has a dagger poised to stab them. They're like "Excuse me, who the hell are you" as well as MC's dialogue, I'm dying because it's what you hear from a typical old timey period. Great job!
*opens my arms wide* stab me wherever you wish king
They only have eyes for one person 👀🗡️
This is so well done, and such a great idea for the limitations of the jam! Your writing really brought the maze to life, and the changes of daylight and atmosphere gave a nice sense of urgency.
I liked that you had such a clear voice for the narrator, and how all the styling and polished details of the GUI added to the experience of that characters world - so well presented!
(spoilers to follow......)
Alas for the character that the story is linear, but I had a lot of fun!
I rate this 10/10 foul pigeons
Ahhhh thank you so much!! I glad you enjoyed it!
That was fun.
Thanks for playing! ^^